Great writing today Brooklyn. You're very first five challenge. You have remembered your full stops and used capital letters when you published. I like how you used a connective "because" o say why you thought the train was fun.
Next time to make your writing even better, you could try using different sentence starters.
Great writing today Brooklyn. You're very first five challenge. You have remembered your full stops and used capital letters when you published. I like how you used a connective "because" o say why you thought the train was fun.
ReplyDeleteNext time to make your writing even better, you could try using different sentence starters.
From Miss D
I like the idea of this train. No more bumpy flights! Great idea.
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